My Writing

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Welcome back to my blog. Today I am going to talk about what I have done in writing. 

 I have learned a new word it is onomatopoeia. It mean a word that is a sound like boom, raw or  bang. We had to watch a video and write some bullet points about what has happened in the video. Then we had to put it in paragraph and highlight the the bullet points that you used.      

Video

Here is my writing.
I am running an 800 meter track race in a 7 year old heat.The man in the hives jacket  was talking in a loud voice to all the runners so we knew where to stand. I heard the crack  from the pistol that the man in the hives jacket was held .I darted from the race track like a lighting bolt .The people’s feet behind me was patting the ground like crazy.I could hear the  audience going crazy I could see lots of signs that said keep ruining .The commentator was talking fast as the racers were running.I could hear my heart pounding up and down really fast.
Here is my bullet points.

• The man in the hivers jacket  was talking in a loud voice to all the runners so we knew where to stand. 
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• I heard the crack  from the pistol that the man in the hivers jacket was held .
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• I darted from the race track like a lighting bolt .
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• The people’s feet behind me was patting the ground like crazy.
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• I could hear the  audience going crazy I could see lots of signs that said keep runing .
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• The commentator was talking fast as the racers were running.

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• I could hear my heart pounding up and down really fast.  
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