I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, August 8, 2018
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello Truby,
ReplyDeleteI really like your post about hot chocolate. I think they are good instructions. I think you should proof read your post, this is because you said "get some marshmallow" witch I think you mean marshmallows. but other then that I enjoy your instructions. Well have a nice day.
-Jasper.
Thanks for the comment I will work on that when I writ other things. Thanks for the tip bye.
DeleteHi Truby I liked the way that you did your poster about making a hot chocolate procedure. You could add some more Interesting words to your poster. Other than that great work Truby.
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