Hero Writing

Hello welcome back to my blog today I am doing a blog about my writing . For the last 8 week we have been writing and drawings and I have finished  my writing is about someone getting stuck in Fortnite. Hope you like it 

One windy and cold day like any other day on the way to school, I was getting bullied by William. William was a big guy who had black hair and dark black eyes . He had a scar going up his dark eyebrow. He said it was from a tiger that he was fighting, but I didn’t believe him. That is the reason Willam would bully me . 

I was forced to give people his food help at work to get their ball if they kicked it  far. If he didn’t he would get beaten up  and I had no friends. I was doing well in school but he couldn't pay for high school. I was 5 feet tall and had blond hair and he had brown eyebrows and my green eyes with bruises  all over him. 

The next day wasn’t the same willam was there  when he was walking around the sun burning him. He was sweating and he was hot. I turned around the corner someone with black and grey hair and brown eyes with an evil smile said give me all your money if you don’t  I will wack you so hard with this bat that you will  be in a coma. I said he didn’t have any money and he swung the bat.  

 I  woke up 10 years later and there were people around him. I was shocked and terrified at the same time. I Started asking questions. They said you crash landed in a ship and you were the only one who survived.I was like what ship what does it look like how long has it been here  . They took me over to the ship. There were just people I didn’t know they had blood and bruises all over them. But they had bagges that said GHOST in dark letters and the symbol looked like a gas mask with a square around it with two lines below it in black. 

 They told him a story about someone named reaper and they were all scared of him.  Every week he comes here and takes people and keeps them in a prison to do work for him until they die  .  Reaper is coming and yells at someone they all run but I don't know what to do. Reaper says come here but I refused and started to mock him and the reaper got angry and said in two weeks you are dead. I saw the same symbol GHOST. When he left I went and asked the people what Shadow means. 

They told me once there was a group named SHADOW and we had the same symbol as them. But one day they were gelish because we would party all the time and they would be doing jobs. So they rushed us ,when we were partying . They were shooting it was as loud as lighting and Lit the place on fire. The fire was hot as lavar as it spread within 1 second.  Everyone was screaming like they had just seen a ghost. We all ran but some of us died, we got in cars and then boosted off like we were going 100 mile per hour and got to safety in a dark cave. It was pitch balck you couldn't see anything   .    

One week later when we were sleeping they found us and we were surrounded by helicopters and cars some tried to escape but they couldn’t . The  cars were roaring louder than a lion and the helicopters were making everything fly away.  They told us to surrender or else we would die, we had no other choice but to surrender. They took us to a place named Pleasant park and every week he comes and takes one of us to do his dirty work . 

Well I better start training for the fight there is a gym just around the corner and you can hire a personal trainer . He could help you train for the fight.  So I  went there and started training for a week. They told me to go to the old guy's house because he could give me a poitin that would give me superpowers  and it would help me. 

 2 weeks later I was stronger then my personal trainer I hope in a lamborghini and drove to salty springs. As I entered, someone pooped out my tirer and my car swerved to the right and I hit a jump and my car went flying into the air. I jumped out of the car and I saw the whole place blow up and it was burning down. I searched the place for the reaper and he was no wear to be seen. I turned my back for one second and the reaper jumped on me. I punch him and he goes back. We start to fight and we both start punching. I was weak from all his punches. I saw the salt and I started crawling over to it while he was laughing. Then he suddenly realised that he grabbed my leg as I grabbed the salt and threw me away. I eat the salt and get back up. He shoots me but I don’t feel a thing. I grab a car and smash it on his head and he goes five feet underground .  I grab him by the leg and start smashing him then I throw him into space. I freed everyone and they were all so happy there were no one to rule them and they had freedom. The next day they all had a party and fireworks set off. They made me their king and me rule was the best rule you could do anything .The End 

Here are my drawings hope you like the my favourite drawing was the villain. My favourite part in the story was when they were fighting.

 

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