Malo lelei, everyone welcome back to my blog,
For our writing we have been learning about descriptive writing. We are changing I to the and going straight to the describing. I have been making a story of a homeless men. We had to use the five emotions which is see, hear, taste, feel and emotions.
Here is what I've done.
When I went to buy the mabels and costume at the mall I could see the costume I was runing to the costume but then I bast into a mabal jar the glass crack open and all the the was rolling everywhere the sound was really irritating .Then I got up I could see my hands bleeding from the glass I had to pay some money for the damage.
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