Welcome back to blog today I am going to a blog about my writing.
For my writing I learnt a new word named onomatopoeia. It means a sound that is a word. And I learnt what metaphor means. It mean an object acts like a human and sounds like a human. like a toy doll when you press a button it starts talk and move.
here is my work.
- Stormy - power hard to move
- Avalaunch falling-horrified collapse
- Freezing - cold shaking
- Snowing blowing dancing flying
- Lighting -trees breaking falling
- Ice -cracking
- Darkness - horrified can’t see where you are going
- Rocks -falling getting weathered
- Trees- breaking- fragile
It was stormy and snowing. The powerful storm started to push me back. the snow was dancing in my face while I was walking down the track. The fragile trees where snapping because of the mighty storm. It was falling onto the ice and then crack the fragile ice and the trees sank to the bottom.I looked back up at the mountain there was a rock on the end of the cliff an avalanche collapse . The snow and the rock were racing to the bottom CRACK!! Went the rock when it hit the bottom. The rock was sliced in half like a knife just cut an orange open. Then lighting stuck lots of trees but in less than a minute the fire went out.
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