Welcome back to my blog today I am talking about my 100 word challenge.
My teacher said it had to be between 95 and 105 I got 90. We had to use strong words which is blustery Exquisite Fragile Disillusioned. My class all started off with this sentences "My shoes were soaked and the blustery rain wouldn’t stop. A grey car I didn’t recognise pulled up beside me."
We are learning to Use strong ideas when writing. Eliminate unnecessary ideas and words. Only include what is powerful, meaningful and important.
Here is my work.
Strong words that you must include:
- Blustery
- Exquisite
- Fragile
- Disillusioned
My shoes were soaked and the blustery rain wouldn’t stop. A grey exquisite car I didn’t recognise pulled up beside me. The window was fragile when he turned it down the window broke off. I started to laugh the drive was disillusioned when he saw the glass shattered all over the ground . He asked me if I had 5$ I said no even though I did I started to walk home. Then he kept following me then I started to run.
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