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Wednesday, November 27, 2019

Writing

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Welcome back to my blog.  Today I am doing a blog about my writing. For writing we have been learning about exploding the moment. 

Exploding the moment means you write a boring sentence and exploding the moment is when  you use more interesting and stronger words. We had to write an event and then write the moment and explode that moment. Here is an example I beat my friend  in a race. If you are exploding the moment you would write the judge clapped his hands my leg were pumping it felt  like I was going faster than a cheater then I was gone like a bullet and then I won the race. 

Here is my writing 
Event : touch
Moment : when I got a try.   

Explode:  The ref blew the whistle. Angus passed me the ball my legs were pumping as I was running down the sideline. I was as fast as a bullet I was right next to the try line I leaped and got the try. I was overjoyed, my team was cheerful

Blue: strong words

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Tuesday, November 26, 2019

Weekly Words

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Welcome back to my blog today I am doing a blog about my weekly words. 

The word I have today is empty. You might be thinking that means you have nothing inside of something, like my box is empty. It means you are sad and have no emotions and you are left alone. If I could rate this out of ten I would make it in between 1 and 2.

Here is my work.

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Thursday, November 21, 2019

Writing

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Welcome back to my blog today I am doing a blog about my writing. For writing I have been learning about the six senses. There is taste, hear , smell , feel, emotions and see.

My teacher gave me a sentence to start with and I had to carry on with it. We had to use the six senses in our writing and highlight it.   We had to use these 5 words which is Unfocused, Fascinating, chilly, forbidden and hesitant.

Here is my writing 

Blue hear
Red smell 
Green feel
Purple taste
Yellow see
I could hear the thunder, booming in the sky. Suddenly the lights went out and the room went pitch black.  I grabbed an old flashlight it didn’t really work that well  then I went to the forbidden basement. It was chilly down there and it smelled bad.I was hesitant to go further suddenly my flashlights went out. I used the wall to guide me to the generator but I could hear a squeaky sound I turned on the  generator. Then I used the wall to guide me to the light switch. I could feel something on my foot  I flicked my foot around and run to the door I slamed the door behind me. Then I turn the TV and PS4 on and play a Fascinating game called Fortnite. I was Unfocused about what just happened I was too focused on the game and eating ice cream. The End

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Math DLO

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Welcome back to my blog today I am doing a blog about maths.

For my maths  we have been learning about adding decimals. My WALT is show your thinking by recording each step. My question is 45.9+42.7 comment if you already know that.

Here is my video.
     
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Wednesday, November 20, 2019

Maths

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Welcome back to my blog today I am doing a blog about my maths. 

My teacher gave us some hard question that we needed to do. For  them I used tidy numbers and written foam . I did a DLO about it with one of my friends my friend used plusing  decimals I did plusing numbers. 

Here is my video.


  
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Tuesday, November 19, 2019

Weekly Words

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Welcome back to my blog today I am doing a blog about my weekly words.

The word I have today is anxious it means you are worry  about something. Like I am worried  when I am in the top three in Fortnite.

Here is my work.

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