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Thursday, November 21, 2019

Writing

Hello,

Welcome back to my blog today I am doing a blog about my writing. For writing I have been learning about the six senses. There is taste, hear , smell , feel, emotions and see.

My teacher gave me a sentence to start with and I had to carry on with it. We had to use the six senses in our writing and highlight it.   We had to use these 5 words which is Unfocused, Fascinating, chilly, forbidden and hesitant.

Here is my writing 

Blue hear
Red smell 
Green feel
Purple taste
Yellow see
I could hear the thunder, booming in the sky. Suddenly the lights went out and the room went pitch black.  I grabbed an old flashlight it didn’t really work that well  then I went to the forbidden basement. It was chilly down there and it smelled bad.I was hesitant to go further suddenly my flashlights went out. I used the wall to guide me to the generator but I could hear a squeaky sound I turned on the  generator. Then I used the wall to guide me to the light switch. I could feel something on my foot  I flicked my foot around and run to the door I slamed the door behind me. Then I turn the TV and PS4 on and play a Fascinating game called Fortnite. I was Unfocused about what just happened I was too focused on the game and eating ice cream. The End

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