Hello,
Welcome back to my blog, today I have a blog about my 100 word challenge.
If you don't know what it is I will tell you have to write a story and get exactly 100 word's. My story is about one of my friend's carrying me. Every thing in this story if not true he is not an og player. He doesn't carry me too .The only thing that is true is us getting the win.
Here is my writing
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I said as I was failing out of the bus I saw a place with lots of trees. My team mate was john wick with the black knight back bling and he had the reaper pickaxe his name was Quaid . I didn’t know what I was doing I look outside of the house and I see my team kill other people he tells me to follow him. On the way he as shooting more people he tell me to drive while he is shooting. After he killed 15 people it a 2v1 he hit a trickshot victory Royale.
Thank you for looking at my blog please comment and reameber to use code lazar in Fortnite item shop. Bye
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, November 8, 2019
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Nice writing,i liked hoe you explained what was happening instead of saying we killed someone then we killed someone else then got a victory royale. but you need to work on your gramma because now it a 2v1 what does that mean. BYE!
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